Did some early morning work on the chapter “Chaos“. There’s nothing like a quiet morning with nothing going on and no one else around to make all the typos and bad sentence structure stand out, lol! Hopefully it makes more sense now. Oh, and corrected an instance where Alaina ‘s name was incorrectly spelled, “Alayna”, for those that caught that.
I’ve also added in an historical, world-building notation about the statue of Whocate. It was sculpted by Loki Whoticore, the mad, former patriarch of House Whoticore. So now he’s a sculptor.
Didn’t see that coming!